Potential
I like the way you started, the arpeggiated melody sounded quite good (despite the fact that having it an octave too high made some of the higher notes a little difficult to hear) and it seemed pretty stable.
However your transition after that made me unsure as to where the song was going, it seemed a bit confusing.
I think the song itself is an octave higher than it should be, and that it could do with more direction and... purpose - for lack of a better word - than it has.
I'm not sure what to think of this in all honesty, I think it has a great deal of potential, though.
7/10