Good.
This is good. Its far from perfect, needs some mastering and has a few timing problems with delay on instruments and things, but it still sounds good. If theres one thing I think you really need to improve on, its your choice of sounds. It sounds like you're merging several genres into one sometimes because of the (variety?) of instruments you choose. I think you should stick to one kind of sound to make your songs sound a little less... odd.
Otherwise, this was pretty good. Not perfect, but you're getting very good at the basics (melodies, percussion, etc)
By the way, Lubos is an idiot. Ignore that fuck.
8/10
4/5
-xXSnowBladeXx
Keep improving.