hmm
So simplistic that it barely measures up as a loop, its a bass and a kick. If you want your songs to sound a lot better then your going to have to go a little more complex. Try and add some things in the background. Some loud snares (not acoustic ones, more like the sort youd hear in most DnB songs) that tapped along to the kick would juice things up a tiny bit. A quiet background bass (Not the one you used for the main tune) that went along with the main melody could sound good depending on how you used it.
I can tell youre using Fruity loops, so try and explore the program a little more.
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