Hmm
I quite like this, its very simple yet sounds not bad.
Parts of the song dont work as well as they could, however, like when the piano comes in at about 01:02. I think you need a lot more pads, maybe some dark powerful strings. Its also fairly weak on the percussion side, which is something to work on.
Its quite repetitive, but I found it strangely catchy, in a good way. Its a little linear for my tastes, though.
Keep improving :3
7/10
4/5
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