I quite like this...
Its very nice, I like the way youve done those strings. You certainly have some talent for melodies, that much is obvious. I think you need a little more on the bass side of things... not literally a bass, but maybe some pads or just something to fill the gap.
Its a very simplistic song, and I think thats why I like it so much.
Keep doing what youre doing :3
9/10
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