kind of...
umm, i dont know.
Most parts were very offkey.
The 303ish preset didnt really fit in with the song at all.
Also, just a reminder:
DONT VOTE ON IT YOURSELF!
It was obvious you gave yourself a 5 just after you submitted it.
umm... yea.
Anyway, could be better, but not all that bad for your second song.
5/10
3/5
-xXSnowBladeXx